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Nice resume
By:ray
Date: 10/17/08 11:34am
In Response To: Re: I'm officially Unemployed... (aud)

one suggestion...you have some good qualifications. Rewrite them to show action and responsibility. Start sentences with words like Organized; Tested, Ensured, etc.

For example:

Led software testing and quality assurance efforts

Rewrite as:

Ensured quality compliance and tested software.

Rather than just describe the tasks, it shows your action and ownership of the task. In atough market, you need to show action and that you are a good investment.

Just a suggestion.

I will keep my ears open. Middle management jobs are tough now. Good luck.

Messages In This Thread

I'm officially Unemployed... -- aud -- 10/16/08 3:46pm
good morning Aud -- rhonda -- 10/17/08 11:08am
thanks Rhonda! *NM* -- aud -- 10/17/08 11:27pm
Tough News, Hang In There! *NM* -- Island Girl -- 10/17/08 9:50am
sorry to hear it -- georgiajan -- 10/16/08 9:57pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- Jenny Shreve -- 10/16/08 7:59pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- queenb -- 10/16/08 6:46pm
Re: I arrive on 1/21 and ..... -- BMD -- 10/16/08 7:19pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- Banjo ve -- 10/16/08 6:41pm
Re: Lots of blessings to you Aud -- Dynamic -- 10/16/08 5:53pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- ray -- 10/16/08 3:48pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- Roger -- 10/16/08 3:49pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- aud -- 10/16/08 6:56pm
Nice resume -- ray -- 10/17/08 11:34am
Are you ready to work for Diddy? :) -- Lola -- 10/17/08 11:07am
Re: Are you ready to work for Diddy? :) -- aud -- 10/17/08 11:26pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- Pirate!! -- 10/16/08 7:07pm
Re: I'm officially Unemployed... -- Dick Elliott -- 10/16/08 9:49pm
so sorry for that, for real *NM* -- Sis Irijah -- 10/16/08 3:48pm